Coin of the Realms (Part II)

The easy answer to ‘how do I capture information about various fictional geopolitical entities’ is to make a list. I like lists. This was my first draft:

Organization Name
Flag
Colors
Coin Name 1
Coin Name 2
Coin Name 3
Religion, Primary
Religion(s), Other
Language, Primary
Language(s), Other
State Nickname 1 State Nickname 2

Which in practice translated into a text doc full of entries like this:

I. GAELUS PACT
“The Old Republics”
“Greenies”

FLAG: Green cross with nimbus on white background
COLORS: Green & white
MAJOR CITIES: Caer Denis, Caer Jule
ETHNIC MAKE-UP: PIKS (55%), JUARO (25%), NAHR (10%), KADDIM VADESH (5%)
PRIMARY CURRENCY: Gold lairds, silver gryffids, copper bittins
MAJOR RELIGION(S): Paganism, Way of the Three Sisters, Occult philosophy

And this is what I’ve relied upon during the drafting of WITCH and HEIST. Simplicity means I can dedicate more time to actually writing. But I’m not satisfied. I continue to experiment with maps, but the software I’ve discovered is either too primitive or prohibitively expensive. Which is a pity.

A well-done map fires my imagination like little else.

Better (Late)

A onetime coworker turned published author recently asked his Facebook followers what they wanted in an author’s web site. A few items popped up regularly. Upcoming tour dates, author bio and bibliography seemed to be most common, with a few requests for favorite books. One person wrote enthusiastically about J.K. Rowling’s site(s?) for the Harry Potter books, which apparently offered behind-the-scenes and other ‘insider’ content.

The gap between the requests and what’s been on offer here, at this web site, didn’t go unnoticed. I’ve revised the ‘about’ section to include explicitly biographical information. Until I get a traditional publishing house to bring one of these manuscripts into print a ‘bibliography’ page would be premature. Book tours, likewise.

The only thing I’m missing, really? More people like you.

From Wyverns to Dragons to Worms

In the background of the Northern Arcadian novels is the threat of invasion from another world, from creatures I have variously dubbed ‘wyverns,’ ‘worms’ and ‘dragons.’ Today, though, the affair is settled, thanks to an extremely interesting (and dubious) article about a proto-language dubbed ‘Eurasiatic.’ The hypothesis is based mostly upon the discovery of multiple cognates (words that sound the same in different languages) for a core vocabulary that includes… ‘worm.’

If you’re trying to sell the notion that, once upon a time, all of mankind had a shared enemy in the great and terrible wyverns dragons worms, this is the kind of thing that makes your story stronger. (And also makes your day.)

On the Role of Imaginative Fiction, etc, etc. (Part II)

I don’t suspect anyone would argue with the notion that one role of imaginative fiction is to provide readers with an opportunity to escape the everyday. Professors might sniff at escapist fiction, but there is good and not-so-good escapist stuff. The good stuff…

  • Features relatable, sympathetic characters
  • Provides a consistently and imaginatively detailed setting
  • J.R.R. Tolkien famously crafted his own languages and myths. His chum C.S. Lewis cobbled together Narnia out of bits borrowed from hither, thither, and Christianity. Narnia fascinated me as a child but lost my interest long before Middle-Earth. I attribute that in part to more vividly drawn characters (with Eustace the principal exception in The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe.) Tolkien also offered a more disturbing villain and heroes without access to a (lionesque) deus ex machina.

    He also offered a haunting vision of a utopia under threat. I’m not sure it’s fair to say good imaginative fiction is to required to present a vision of a world we think superior to our own. But that notion has never been far from my mind all these years I’ve been thinking about the world of Northern Arcadia.

    The Fools Lecture Series, Vol II: Naming Names

    In the manuscript for ‘Thief,’ a large fortified structure constructed by persons unknown is central to the events that unfold. The name for that structure that I’ve used the past year (‘the Spire’) never fit perfectly, and that minor failure itched like a half-healed sunburn. The itch needed to be addressed.

    First, I searched for alternates to the noun ‘Spire.’ While I liked the evocative power of ‘Spire,’ I wanted something more tangible, descriptive and (of course) concrete.

  • Fortress
  • Tower
  • Castle
  • Redoubt
  • Keep
  • All of these had the solidity I wanted, but no glamor. I tapped my pen against my mouth (terrible habit when you’re holding an uncapped Sharpie) and I came up with more options.

  • Lighthouse
  • Monument
  • Stele
  • Needle
  • My interest was pricked by ‘needle.’ Vivid noun, but I felt like it needed an adjective or modifier of some sort. More scratching on paper with my Sharpie and I had another list.

  • Iron
  • Silver
  • Marble
  • White
  • Obsidian
  • Sapphire
  • Redemption
  • Dominion
  • Elvish/Dwarfish
  • Vernus
  • ‘Redemption’ refers to the Bay the former-Spire watches over, ‘Dominion’ the principal military power of the colonial period, and Vernus was the name I’d settled upon for the man who discovered the ‘Spire.’ Many of the place names we take for granted (Virginia, Jamestown, Columbia) honor individuals. ‘Vernus’ Needle’ didn’t exactly fall sweetly from the tongue, though. More tapping of my pen against my mouth. Sharpe’s Needle, now… that sounded better. Switching the name from ‘Vann van Vernus’ to ‘Sir Sydney Sharpe’ is easy enough, this early in the game.

    And the itch I’d felt to revise that name vanished.

    The Fool’s Lecture Series, Vol I: Sense and Sensitivity

    I mentioned in a previous post that one of my goals when doing a first-pass round of edits is to focus on appeals to all five senses. Done properly, the effect for the reader should be to make the story more pungent, vivid, and easier to imagine. I score two more benefits, though. I’m obliged to imagine the scene in fine detail in my own mind, and I’m also forced to confront some of the very different ways in which other people see the world.

    For many people, I think meals are the (fanciful metaphor alert) hinges of the day, closing one segment of the day and swinging open another. Morning doesn’t begin without breakfast, lunch is a breath before the afternoon’s labor, and dinner heralds the calm before a night’s sleep. Food is a visceral pleasure. Food provides common ground for good conversation, and good food translates into better health.

    None of that resonates with me. If I could pop a pill in the morning and have all my nutritional requirements met? I’d be content. I’m a rarity (not to say an oddity.) If I want to write fiction that appeals to people who aren’t like me, I think I’m obliged to see the world from different angles.

    Or maybe that should be ‘I’m obliged to sample the different flavors of the world’?

    (Close to the) Edits

    I was up until the wee hours last night working on the THIEF sample available on this web site. I’m editing, which is absolutely premature. But I am, and I thought it might be helpful (for me, maybe not so much you) to document exactly what I’m trying to do. Basic stuff:

    (1) Eliminate sentences, paragraphs and pages which don’t fit within the emerging narrative structure.
    (2) Simplify verbs and verb tenses. The nuance provided by more complex verb tenses isn’t worth the page clutter, at least in commercial fictions like WITCH and THIEF.
    (3) Rehearse and revise narrative voice, with an eye towards consistency, plausibility, likability, and trustworthiness. In later revision rounds (after a full draft of the manuscript is complete) this step will become a higher priority.
    (4) Reinforce appeals to all five senses.
    (5) Eradicate stray spaces, misspellings and unintentional grammatical follies.

    Simple stuff, but important enough to keep me up at night. (The coffee helped.)

    The Fabric of a New World: Outfits and Costumes

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    Costuming for a quasi-historical novel offers different challenges (and opportunities) for an author than a narrative set in a contemporary era. If I describe a guy with a silver beard, wearing Birkenstocks, jeans and a freshly-laundered tie-dye Grateful Dead t-shirt, … Continue reading

    I and I and Abigail Moore

    A fantastic article in the Atlantic looks at the challenge for a male author trying to write from a female persepective. I love the conclusion:

    As literary critic Sarah Seltzer says, “writing across gender may be harder, require more research and humility. We may fail or get ‘called out’ for letting our biases show, or being ignorant. But the attempt at understanding, empathy, and inhabiting the soul of someone whose life experience is not ours, helps us grow as writers, and people too.”

    This is exactly why I was willing to commit to a female protagonist in WITCH, the first novel I’ve written intended for publication. I’ve fretted over Abigail, and I’ve worried that, as a male author, focusing upon her as my main character may discourage potential agents, editors and/or publishers.

    I’ve decided I don’t care. Maybe it’d be easier to put out a manuscript that featured a lithe, blue-eyed, blond-haired lad as a protagonist, in a world where the girls are boyish and plucky until they decide they’re more interested in “lipstick and nylons.” But I’m ready to read something different. I’m ready for fantastic worlds that don’t crib most of their mythology from Tolkein. I’m ready for compelling characters transformed by the world around them.

    Funny thing? The first draft of THIEF, the novel that follows WITCH, came together in less than half the time of WITCH. Maybe my worries are accurate. Maybe I’ve made my life more difficult by choosing Abigail and her story. But she’s made me grow as a writer. And maybe a person, too.

    Music of the States

    Twelve years after the release of Blonde on Blonde, Bob Dylan recognized he’d caught something special:

    “The closest I ever got to the sound I hear in my mind was on individual bands in the Blonde on Blonde album. It’s that thin, that wild mercury sound. It’s metallic and bright gold, with whatever that conjures up.”

    When I think about American music, I hear the Violent Femmes song with the lyric: “I like all kinds of music/but I like American music best.” When I try to define what I mean by the homey little phrase ‘American music’ I return to Dylan’s allusive, elusive description. I want Northern Arcadia to have a comparable musical tradition. Little problem. That ‘wild mercury sound’ was born from the blues, by which I mean…

    “the name given to both a musical form and a music genre that originated in African-American communities of primarily the “Deep South” of the United States around the end of the 19th century from spirituals, work songs, field hollers, shouts and chants, and rhymed simple narrative ballads.”

    – source: Wikipedia article on the Blues.

    There are people of all different skin colors in Northern Arcadia, for reasons I’ve touched on before. But there is no group of human beings who could be considered analagous to the African-American communities in the colonial Americas. When I first came to that conclusion, I stalled. I worried I’d never find a way to bring that ‘wild mercury sound’ to life in the taverns and camps and cobblestone streets of my novel new world.

    This is the point when dhao bo, the toad people native to Northern Arcadia, stopped being a special effect (or an obscure reference) for me and became something rather more substantial in my imagination. Making music central to the toad people’s culture didn’t seem like a stretch. Toads and frogs and all their ilk warble on for hours, right? And of course (it flashed across my mind) the dhao bo tribes could croak messages back and forth network-style, allowing for some fairly sophisticated planning and military tactics. The dhao bo of Northern Arcadia would likely share an oral history, which would provide more information and a better context for dhao bo tribesmen during Pierre’s artifact hunt than Pierre himself.

    And the music of Northern Arcadia no longer seemed destined to be completely funk-free.